To borrow from Captain Renault (from Casablanca), I'm shocked, shocked to find so little enthusiasm for poetry!
99 of my students responded to this survey.
I like to read poetry--Blue and Red are some form of Agree.
72% say So-so to Strongly Disagree
They like to write poetry even less! 83% say So-so to Strongly Disagree!
And plenty of them have an "I don't get it" feeling when they do read poetry.
Almost 70% feel like the don't get it Half to All the time!
So we started with pretty straightforward poems.
Where I'm From, for which they could fill in a template.
Next, we read Billy Collins' Introduction to Poetry
Introduction to Poetry, by Billy Collins
I ask them to take a poem
and hold it up to the light
like a color slide
or press an ear against its hive.
I say drop a mouse into a poem
and watch him probe his way out,
or walk inside the poem's room
and feel the walls for a light switch.
I want them to waterski
across the surface of a poem
waving at the author's name on the shore.
But all they want to do
is tie the poem to a chair with rope
and torture a confession out of it.
They begin beating it with a hose
to find out what it really means.
With this we talked about imagery, sounds, tone and mood. We also decided that our personal experience of the poem is the point.
Next, we read...
Autobiography in 5 chapters, by Portia Nelson
I
I walk down the street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I fall in.
I am lost....I am helpless.
It isn't my fault.
It takes forever to find a way out.
II
I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I pretend I don't see it.
I fall in again.
I can't believe I am in the same place.
But, It isn't my fault.
It still takes a long time to get out.
III
I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I see it is there.
I still fall in. It's a habit.
My eyes are open.
I know where I am.
It is my fault. I get out immediately.
IV
I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I walk around it.
V
I walk down another street.
Almost everyone agreed that walking down the street was a symbol.
The walking was generally agreed to be a symbol for "making your way through life," or "being in difficult relationships," or "struggling with problems," or "addictions."The hole was problems, obstacles, mistakes, bad habits, addictions, and the like.
91% agreed that the author learned through the process.
With respect to Theme, I asked students to finish the sentence, Life is...
They said:
hard
hard and you need to find a way and not get stuck
Full of bad habits that people struggle to get out of.
Life is full of mistakes, Learning from your mistakes can take a while but it happens eventually.
Life is a hole
full of mistakes and people may sometimes make them but they'll learn from them after a while
life has difficulties that you have to avoid
Life is repetitive.
Confusing
life is full of bad habits and you can overcome the mistakes.
Life is full of mastakes and getting into bad habits and changing your thinking can break those habits and and help you though those mastakes.
I don't know.
Life is cool.
addicted
Life is like walking down the same road everyday but sometimes if there is a problem or not you need to take a different path than you always do. Life is about adventure and you don´t need to do the same thing everyday and you might need to take the risk and try something new.
life is like a big hole do not go down the same hole there is always another way
Life is a maze
hard and there's full of mistakes you need to learn from.
Life is like the path, many holes will come up, and we might fall in, but if we don't learn on change we will never move forward on the path.
Life is a mess
hard but you have to make the right decisions.
finite. and you should make better choices and not ruin yourself.
life is when we dig our own holes that we don't see until its to late or until we don't acknowledge it
Life is full of bad habits, but if you eliminate the problem it will change your life.
life is learning from your mistakes
full of problems.
Life is trying to find new ways to break old habits to improve your life.
Life is full of problems that people seem to always fall into.
Life is repetitive, but we can change that.
Life is a cycle, don't get stuck in a bad one.
Life is full of decision making and finding out whats best for yourself.
to not repeat the past/ to not fall into the same mistake again
A street with a giant hole, that every time you try something new you fall in, but it's your choice whether you want to crawl out or not, and if you do, ask you want to continue what you are doing, or if you want to finally move on.
Life is a learning experience and after you make the same mistake over and over again you learn to stop or do something different
Full of obstacles, that you (nearly all the time) have the power to take responsibility for and fix, even if it may take a long time to do. But the problem won't go away if you choose to ignore it.
Life is a street with many obstacles. These obstacles may seem tempting, but will slow you down. You may have made it a habit of running into these obstacles, but you must learn to avoid them.
Life is tough, because she only learned from her mistakes by repeating it and doing it over and over until she learned.
full of mistakes that have been made we have to learn to stop making them
Life is built on improvement and sometimes it is up to you to fix it yourself.
Life is kinda like a street when you walk down it there could be a bunch of holes or problems that you could fall into and you have to learn to move around those holes or to learn to fix problems that are happening.
Life is like a city, with many streets leading to different desitinations, some with more holes than others. But humans are stubborn, and so we keep putting ourselves in the path of holes.
Life is like a sidewalk. You can choose where you want to go and what you want to do, and you can learn from your mistakes. If one path doesn't work for you, take another one next time.
Life is like a city different streets are problems or people that we struggle with or make us happy so we have to pick the right streets to walk down and avoid the bad ones
Life is something full of bad habits and dark places, but there are also ways to avoid these and overcome them.
Life is full of bad decisions. Its easy to take the bad path and not be able to get yourself back out.
"Life is full of mistakes but we will figure out a way to move past them eventually."
Repetitive
Life is full of bad habits
life is full of mistakes that you will make but you can fix
Everyone in the world.....
Life is full of opportunity for mistakes and you have to take action to properly bypass them.
Life is full of obstacles/mistakes but you can't keep doing the same mistakes that give you obstacles
Life is like a repeating pattern, you choose the same path but it isn't always the right path.
challenge and we need to beat our mistakes and get up and overcome them
life is good
Life is like a sidewalk sometimes there may be things that get in the way but you can always find another way around those things.
what you make it out to be.
there is always more than one solution but sometimes you cant see
a road you walk on, no matter what you always get a choice of which road
life is hard you spend most of your time trying to break bad habits to become a better person
The message of this poem is basically it is trying to get you to know that the person is walking down the street.
Life is merry-go-round (keep repeating so that's why I put merry-go-round).
making mistakes and avoiding them the next time
Life is controlled by your decisions and self-discipline.
Finding out what you have done wrong and fixing it.
a loop :(
a roller coaster
a confusing mess
Life is a big problem
Life is leading you to a new direction.
A big hot (confusing) mess.
life is a constant pit/hole of mistakes
she makes a lot of mastaks all her life
Like falling down a large hole and having to pick yourself up.
like school
Life is full of giant holes, just don't fall in them.
Life is short and you only get one chance, don't try to spend your life trying to get to something that isn't reachable and get something within reach
about trying new things. In the poem the author repeats saying i walked down the same street and she repeats like multiple times, but then at the end she says she walked a different street that could show that they're doing something different and or recovering from addiction
like a seen or unseen hole in the sidewalk.
Life is full of its ups and down you just need to know if your the one who is going to make it better
about making mistakes to get better and learn from them.
Life is something that everyone has to live threw some people have it harder than others but everyone has its challenges in life but most people alwasy learn from those challenges even if it takes sometimes
Meaning
Life is limited its not always going to be there so you need to make it the best time, in the time that you have.
to keep a look out for the "holes"
The message is you need to just stop doing the thing that hard in your life if it's in your control. You need to realize whats going on and just stop it.
Life is difficult
Life is like a giant hole that you can fall into but you can easily avoid bad things by walking on a different street.
Life is walking down the street everyday, running into obstacles over and over again until you learn to change and walk a different street.
Life is never easy.
full of mistakes and obstacles but you can learn from them to not make them again.
Life is like walking down the same street with a giant sink hole until you find a new street
A short path with one big challenge that must be overcome.
a journey that you learn from.
puzzle.
Life is a path that you might love but sometimes in places and in the end it is dreadful and sad.
Life is hard and there will be obsticles but that doesn't mean you give up
life is hard and you will make the same mistakes until you learn to go down a different path.
Life is learning from past mistakes.
Life is filled with stuck points.
Conclusion of the short poetry unit tomorrow.